Wednesday, 20 March 2013

W.A.L.T describe a character Pt 2

Today as a class we modelled using a Y chart on the whiteboard to help us plan what our character...looks like....sounds like and feels like....Here is a photo of what our Y chart looks like...
Today (Monday the 25th March) we looked at our Y charts and shared descriptive words we had used. We wanted to see if we could use the thesaurus to find better words...these are the words we found...
Our goal this week is to use at least 2 of the words on this list in my descriptive writing.

As a class we have started writing about Garfield. This is what our writing looks like so far...

Garfield is a cat that is fat. He loves lasagne and loves pushing Odie off the couch. If he was a bowling ball he would get a strike everytime. Sometimes Odie helps him and sometimes he doesn't. He's the sort of cat that you need to get to know because his cuddly pappy looks are quite deceiving.

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