Monday, 3 June 2013

JK - WALT record our ideas with more detail

JK FOCUS - For the children to record their ideas with more detail using a variety of learning tools.
CLASS FOCUS - Recount writing 
Purpose (Why are we writing)- to share our experience of cross country with a wider audience.
WALT record our ideas with more detail
CO CONSTRUCTED SUCCESS CRITERIA - WE WILL KNOW WE HAVE ACHIEVED THIS WHEN...  
the events are in order - e.g Beginning, Middle, End

the writing is in the past tense - e.g I ran as fast as I could...

we use time connectives - e.g next, meanwhile, within minutes, soon after, later, etc

we use powerful verbs - e.g running, sprinting, warming up, stretching, fainting etc

we use similes - e.g I ran as fast as a cheetah... the sweat was dripping down my face like a leaky tap








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