- Does it have a clear beginning, middle and end?
- Does it use adjectives to make the descriptions better?(these could describe size, colour, texture etc.)
- Juicy words - deep blue eyes like the sparkling sky
- Describe what they look like
- Describe something your character does to show us what kind of person they are
- language features - similes punctuation -
- Does it have capital letters at the start of each sentence and full stops at the ends?
- Is it exciting so you can draw the reader in make sure it makes sense - Proof read
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